Threnody

Oh wow. Umm... erm... heheheh, uhhh. *Deep breath.* Don't kill me for saying this but this song was very morbid. It did however flow very well. I don't know... maybe ...

very simple yet meaningful poem. I liked reading it very much. A few corrections in bold; It's on the streets, In people you meet, Even in those heartless souls. When ...

They just change what your file icon looks like. Check out my profile and each section has a different picture. "Burning" is a book burning.

I think that this was very heartfelt and sweet. It definitely held a lot of emotion. (why is "a lot" spelled that way!?) Here's a few corrections; I remember poetic ...

I'm sorry guys but I'm going to have to withdraw from this.

Alright. Here's the count: Tyra Kylar Joshin Eriphyle Adelle Orin Ballow Evan We'll wait for two more people. Thanks guys!

*You just cut off the story!* Whoa... It was Kevin. I saw him through my position in the heating duct right above the small room. This room's heating duct was ...

Emmaline (Emma) ~ I dug into the pancakes Emeliana (sp?) had just made. They were warm and fluffy and mine were dripping with butter. "You gotta teach me how to ...

It's alright for now. They say mimicry is the best form of flattery... :D

"We'll have to be careful, we can't put Abi's Aunt in danger. It's against out code and the main code of ethics. We need to be very wary."

I needed to change the Empresses name to Neala.

Oh! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're having fun! And to the poem... Cool format! I love this poem! It's so flowing. Just a bit of corrections; chemicals made to ...

Our posts got mixed up I think

I looked at the glass. It had fancy swirls of blue and green prints. Like a computer chip... I ran over to John and checked his pulse. He was dead. ...

"John... We need a break. I don't know if you've been robotized or possessed or something but we need a break." He raised an eyebrow. "Fine." We walked into a ...