Threnody

No. But from previous experience with storybooks, I think that it helps if there is more people... but if you want to start than go ahead, or tell me if ...

Could you please review this short poem? Thanks! Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

Okay, we've got nine people. That's more than I thought we'd get so anyone can begin if they'd like or I'll start if you guys wish.

It’s all but some threads on the tapestry They are mangled and frayed, you laid them low The insignificant ones, nobody sees In the dark corners where no one will ...

I don't know what to say...

I need a push. More like shove.

What? (in small voice) I like twilight... but... there's no reason to get violent...

Hmm. You got quite off topic when you randomly popped in the fact that the brownies had killed/destroyed their mother. It was very alarming when I was happily reading about ...

It looks like everyone's caught the grammar mistakes. I thought this was a very clever story! I loved the concept and the how well it flowed. The idea was cool. ...

Oh this was so cute and really funny! It had a great concept. I loved it a lot! Awesome job Snoink! I loved the characters, especially Addie. The whole thing ...

Very simple yet charming. It plays with the century old concept of the "key to my heart" It is a bit cliched but I still enjoyed reading it. It had ...

Oh my. Very well written. I loved the entire concept. Just a few corrections~ How could I have imagined this --the sense of peace and how much cleaner the air ...

Wow. Over all, as a sketch, this was very beautiful! It truly holds the significance and beauty of a rose. Although, the bottom petal looks a bit wilted and so ...

I know it's spelled "a lot." It was just a random thought I got when I was typing "a lot" That happens to me a lot. (There it is again! ...

Is it rap? It doesn't seem like rap. Rap would have a more consistent rhyme scheme and a more selective syllable pattern. If it's anything than it should be either ...