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Re: My First Suitor
I really like this. The first two stanzas are the best, I love the rhyming, how it's not completely rhymed but still within the boundaries. Your english and tenses go ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: You make me want to...
I liked it! It was really cute! Only thing was, your flow kinda got messed up on some parts (I know, cuz I struggle with flow a lot.) Like here: ...
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Stephen
I really like this! The math problems part was a bit confusing, the way it was broken up, but other than that, it was a great poem. It was really ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: Guilty
That's really cool! Interesting idea too. :) I love the: "What did I do?" line. I could picture someone muttering that. Very interesting and very nice flow. It was odd, ...
Mar 18, 2008
