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Re: Names
Well, seeing as J is drowning, I might as well help. (Just kidding, I'm not that evil. I do have some names though. Ok, a bunch.) All-time Favorite Boy Names: ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: Mama's Smile
Hey! Just let me say, I LOVE Dance with my father, and I think this poem is basically it's equivelant. So yeah, this is great. One thing I saw was ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Journey
I like the idea a lot! Can I just maybe suggest some things? She was just sixteen, When she jumped into that car. Mama didn’t know she’d gone, And papa ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Light blonde hair with sea-green eyes and pretty, porcelain skin. Very tall and athletic. Very intelligent.
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Dancing Beneath The Moonlight
This is really pretty! It painted wonderful pictures in my mind. I really like it, it's beautiful. This is my favorite line: She yearns to be loved, yet dances with ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Seraphim and Serpents.
"Lily! Lily!" Severus screamed, pushing through the fir trees toward the sound of her voice. "I'm here, Sev! Oh, Sevy, please hurry!" "I'm coming, Lily! I'm coming!" he yelled back, ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Blinded
That's very pretty. And very thought-provoking. The entire time I was reading I had butterflies in my stomach. I really have nothing bad to say besides watch you grammar, and ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Cherry Blossom Petals
This is amazingly gorgeous. I love it. The cherry-blossom petals are falling like tears into my hair. (This is pretty, almost like a haiku. I like it a lot) This ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Branding
This is absolutely gorgeous. Your imagery is beautiful. I love the bumpy flow at the first, and then how it smooths towards the end. This is the most amazing part: ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
Makes me think of a little girl sitting on a graden swing talking to herself. My baby cousin does that. :) This_is_history
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Cry - a poem on child sexual abuse
I love this. It's heartbreaking, yet so true. The metaphors are beautiful. The first stanza is especially. My favorite line is this: I was a bud, Awaiting bloom on the ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
10/10. lol.
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
I think you have shoulder length black or dark brown hair, big puppy-dog hazel eyes, lush lips that smile often, long, dark lashes that make you look like a porcelain ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Silver heair, evil green eyes and a mad scientist grin. :)
May 19, 2008 -
Re: He doesn't see me
He Doesn't See Me First Verse: He doesn't see me, Like I see me, He sees me beautiful. And he doesn't hear me, Like I hear me, He hears me ...
May 19, 2008
