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Vardinon ~~~~~~~ "You had better keep a tight rein on her Carlisle. Especially now, with the male hormones catching up with hers." I said, smirking a little.

I think both Erin and Zen are in classes. The story seemed to have moved on, lol. Let's say Erin and Zen haven't seen each other since he walked her ...

Vardinon's first name is Malachi. Well, actually, it's Malachi Alexei Vardinon. :) ~Vardinon~ I smiled (well, half sneered) when Carlisle walked in the room. We had been friends since we ...

I really like this. The first two stanzas are the best, I love the rhyming, how it's not completely rhymed but still within the boundaries. Your english and tenses go ...

Oh, that's great! I love Jaden, she seems like such an interesting character. And idk about the letters, I don't think we actually figured it out, but letters in the ...

Erin I couldn't keep the giddy smile off my face as I took his arm. He smiled at me, and for a moment I forgot he was a vampire.

Erin "Sure! I mean, not sure I care, I mean sure as in, yeah sure, I'd love to." I said, my words getting tangled again.

Erin "Umm...I think it's with someone called Varda...Vardi...Vardinon?"

Erin "Thanks," I said. "Ummm...so, what are we supposed to be doing? You're a vampire, right, so....what's the next class, or whatever? I'm still kinda flustered. A whole summer away ...

Erin "Oh, that's pretty! I mean, no, not pretty like feminine, cause of course you're not, I meant pretty like, um...oh," I said, looking down at my feet. I was ...

Erin. "Yeah, it's Erin," I said, smiling softly. "What's your name?"

Vardinon ~~~~ "well, I suppose I'm playing hooky." I said. I usually didn't speak so casually, but with this girl, I felt it was safe. "No, not really. I let ...

A mentor is supposed to teach the kids about their powers, and give them their gifts (a peice of jewelry that helps them channel their magic) mostly, and sorta, be ...

8/10. I like the qoutes. The spelling...not so much. But hey, to each his own. :)

Erin "Y-yeah, I'm fine. I'm SO sorry, I'm such a klutz, I didn't watch where I was going, I'm sorry. Oh, and look, now I got glitter on your coat!" ...