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Quite, quite lovely. I apologize in advance for being nit-picky. Heads up, there is a ridiculous surplus of quotage here. Don't explode. If they had been they surely would have ...

Well gosh darn it, "Explosive_Pen" said it all. This probably won't even count as a review. Still, I would like to say that I loved the heart with the arrow ...

I can relate to nearly everything you said, especially the forming of different opinions and then the apathy because of how good his music was. He never TRIED to be ...

Wow, for a forty-minute story, that was pretty great. Very suspenseful. A had just a few issues with some things. Her mouth is still gaping, her big furry body weighing ...

Wow, for a forty-minute story that was pretty great. Very suspenseful. One thing I would have liked to see is maybe the main character's confusion about the wolf-girl suddenly leaving, ...

One thing - "Still quicker and quicker are thoughts race past the ill kept clock" "quicker and quicker our thoughts..." I think, and "ill-kept clock" with the hyphen.

as if the big blue eyes of the child that stood before him persuaded him to attach the name. Wow, terrific. Not many people I know can write that kind ...

I wrote this rather than writing my U.S. History essay. :] My mind taunts me with rapid transitions from swirling masses of illegible concepts to vast nothingness and back again. ...

Quite short. Something I wrote when I couldn't write. I struggle to find the right words. In a foggy, mystical realm in which my vocabulary dwells, I crawl and reach ...

It never hurt anyone (except countless people, and as I've been told, cats) to be curious. At least, when it comes to this kind of information-receiving. I would have done ...

Very entertaining! Long, yes, but consistently fun. It wasn't at all hard to read through that, and the only grammatical error I found was "not coherent" in this passage: “He ...

:D This was surprisingly entertaining. Most fan-fics I used to read of Harry Potter were written before certain books came out, predicting what they would be like, so to write ...

:D Thanks, you guys. ANNNND Maggie, thank you very much for the criticism, and yes, while writing it those mistakes you saw were specifically to keep the rhythm consistent. I ...

That was quite lovely, I must say. I had no idea you could write fiction like that! It actually sounded really sophisticated. I'm jealous. :] I just had a few ...

Creatively subtle is the first thing that comes to mind for me. :] Not like the "wannabe" poems you'll see every Joe Shmoe write because they've had some sort of ...