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This is quite helpful. x) Even nearly four years prior to its conception. Hooray for commenting on barely-alive posts! -- James

Ahhh this is so great! xD Good work =]

Slow and steady The rain falls Eyes of pane glass Drops glide past Lightning strikes serenity The wind howls with wisdom Eyes of pane glass Drops glide past Pollen over ...

People need to review this! Gah! My comment and Kelly's are lonely!!

:] Hahaha! Nice, Izzy. The "water bowl" part caused a lot of confusion. Also, I couldn't help but to have felt a little jealous in the beginning. Now I feel ...

Haha! :] Glad to hear it, Izzy. =) Thank you, all of you, for the feedback. It sincerely means a lot to me. :)

...why are there no breaks where there are different stanzas? Is this just my computer? This completely messes up the poem...

Considering I haven't reviewed anything in ages...I really don't have a right to post this. Seeing as either way I will be posting it, I might as well do it ...

Hi! This may or may not be a review. =P There was some great word-play here, June: "unsecured peace and secured dread", "fear casted us, and we cast fear" "grasps ...

Since you objected, I won't give critique on trivial things like grammar. However, I will say that this was a very moving piece. I will not say I understand, no, ...

Welcome to YWS! :] I hope you like it so far. If you're ever in desperate need of a review of things like poems, short fictions, fan-fictions or non-fictions, let ...

Banned for mooing.

Pretty. 9/10 for lack of face.

Hahaha, well. Little do you know, I actually do(n't) live in an igloo! So there. TUBM devours typewriters on a nightly basis.

Paramore is great. I think I might have already rated your signature, and even though I don't understand it, I'll give it 10/10 because it's there. :]