Thirst_23

Rythm of sentences, like Ares mentioned, can do a lot. I think you're rythm is fin, just go back and read the whole alod. It's amazing how much you improve ...

Well, well, well. Another TwiFanfic. Now, I'm going to try and not be biased, because if there's one book I dislike above all else, or one author, it would be ...

Preface Confessions The church was quiet and cold; it was made entirely of stone. The saints and angels looked down on me as I prayed and prepared myself for the ...

Hey, all I hope Mesh sees this soon. I'm kinda excited; it's been years. Thirst...haha. No, sadly, it's not published. But, for the first time, I have ideas that I ...

My name is thirst_23. Thirst not only expresses my keen interest in vampires, but is also the name of my book. I used to hang out a lot on young ...

This was so well done that even I can't complain about. I laughed, I cried, and you insulted two of my favorite characters of all time. Good job. Can't complain ...

Hey, I'll be your reviewer today :) Hey! On the whole great job! The piece flowed very well, you kept me hooked to the story and wanting to read more. ...

Thanks for the letting me know the lay of the land. 2:1, sounds fair. Hehe, how'd you ever guess? Proud member of Bloodsuckers Annonymous!

Hi I'm thirst_23. I'm really into good-guy vampire stories. I'm writting a book right now, and I stumbled on this site. Seems cool. See you around,