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Hi there, let's get to the nitpicks :D Tempus, Oblivious to the hardship she was creating sighed. I couldn't really understand this sentence, clear it up a little? His shoulder ...

Hi, let's get to the nitpicks! :D but whats done remains done In the sentance before, you need to put a comma since you're starting with a "But." Plus on ...

Haha =) Jacob is better. But I wrote this a long time ago though. Like around January By that time I was sort of obsessed with twilight sagas So I ...

PLEASE! I would like you to help me with the those review.....this is my first time....and help seems nice....

I really love it! It reminds me of someone I care. I understand the poem. You did a very great job.

Yes, it was for new moon. You may show this to your friend I do not mind. I am sort of obsessed too. Young Gun I will see what I ...

It might not be good.......but feel free to comment

Never existed Sorry, I had to leave It was the only way to protect you I put you in danger way to long and you knew but never let me ...