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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Annabel in Neverland - Chapter One

    This is very well written, with very nice phrasing. Is it just me, or is the large spaces between the sentences really annoying? Probably just me. ^^ I like the ...

    Sep 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Outcast Chapter Two

    I like this! It does seem to move a little too fast sometimes, but I like the characterization; although, to be honest, there seems to be a little of cliche ...

    Sep 5, 2011


See the world. It's more fantastic than any dream made or paid for in factories. Ask for no guarantees, ask for no security.
— Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451