Theonetheycallpink

I’m filled with this anger inside And every time they point the finger I explode I spit words that never miss Victims feel the pain Something I try to hide ...

For a first attempt i would say this is good, i personally think that the best pieces are raw and should not be revised, yet your choice of words is ...

this is the first post i've read since i just joined s second ago, impressed, i liked the concept of the piece, and ur choice of words, it was not ...

Hi, not sure what to say except the obvious which is that im new, I love to write poetry, lyrics, as long as i've got a pen my thoughts will ...