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*thanks for doing this* Dylan Dylan looked around, "Well, it's pretty late, so nothing's open right now. And Lyanna needs some new clothes, so why don't you guys follow me." ...

Does this mean you're bringing death to the storybooks? 8/10 creative, but kind of scary.

Good one Amy! Let's see if this thing can revive itself.

*Is this thing dying this quickly?*

Hi! This made me laugh. I really like it, too, even though it is a bit rough. I'll try to add some grammar to where I think it would fit. ...

Hi. This is very good. Short ans simple. I love the way the words flow together and almost create the swaying of the leaves in the wind. I think you ...

9/10 Just because Johnny Depp is in it!

Hi, this is my first critique on a script so bear with me. I like the way you built up to the story, but is the living room in a ...

Hi there, I just want to say that this was a very sweet and simple poem, although it conveys alot of feeling in very few lines. I do agree with ...

I nominate: gsppcrocks10: for being awesome, and continuing our private storybook Kamas: for being super-fantastic! AquqMarine: for just being funny and awesome RangerHawk: for talking to me about ban

Ever Ever was only slightly surprised about Vear, she hadn't fit in with her out-of-place language, and her style. But the part about the future was surprising. She looked at ...

Aww! Thank you! It's so cute!

Hey! I'll take one! Um... well I really like Paramore. But you can go crazy! I don't have a preface to what you do.

Hey gasper, I just have one question. Are we scientists or are we regular people who find out about the oscillator? And how do we find out about it?

Ever Her cheek stinged from the smack that she had recieved from Raptor. She rubbed it to try to lessen the pain. She walked over to the group that included ...