Theodorable

ha ha! i love this one. it is so true (most of the time) but you add some punctuation and let it flow better. *quote Creativity is taken away Work ...

this one was really good. it says so much with so few words. anyway i really like this one b/c i could relate to it. :oops: this has happened to ...

wow, simple yet so descriptive. :P you really are good. and i'm not just saying that. keep on writing! :smt024

hey, it has a good topic but I agree that the last lines need to flow better. you could also make it a bit longer and in depth, but those ...

hey, kaylyn! :D This is a really fun poem about halloween. It catches the spirit of the holiday and puts it into words. Great job! :smt074

Hey Kaylyn! :D Great poem, it flows really good and it catches the meaning. Keep on writing! :smt039

Hey, guys. I really don't know if this one will be as good as the last one, but I hope that I can keep up with you all! I wrote ...

Broken pieces scattered about. Trying to remember how they got there, I injure myself with a scattered memory. I found bits and pieces under the table only to see them ...

WOW! :) I cannot believe you thought my poetry was good. :shock: You my good sir, are a natural. I really don't know what to say, except for that it ...

WOW! :) I cannot believe you thought my poetry was good. :shock: You my good sir, are a natural. I really don't know what to say, except for that it ...

Thnks! :D I really don't know how I got my feelings down on paper. Thnks for the criticism is really helps! I hope to also post a story that I ...

Do You Mind? Please do not turn me away, Because I am only being honest with you. Do you mind if I stay? I am only telling you what is ...