Theodorable

hey! this was really good, but i have one question. is "load" meant to be loud? anyway, this is a good poem, all the opposites are perfect. This made me ...

thanks, i wrote this the other night out of thin air. and no it isn't from personal experiences, so thanks for all the comments. :p

this was a very good, very sad poem. :smt089 I loved it, but i hated it all at the same time. :? This was all emotion and written from the ...

How could you? I trusted you and let you know my darkest secrets, secrets that I trusted no one else with. I spent time with you. I let my guard ...

thanks! i just really appreciate the critiques. it helps a lot and i like to see how other people view it.

Hey everybody! This is my first story so please critique, and don't hold back!

Chapter 1 The Unexpected Visitor “Hey, Chris!” I heard a familiar voice call behind me. I turned around to see my best friends heading towards me. “Hey guys,” I said. ...

This was really good. Although it could use some punctuation. And in the line " Love is like hate" it really doesn't work with the rest of the poem, the ...

I really liked this one, the shortness doesn't take away from the poem either. I really like this part: Then I slip Then I fall Then I scream Then I ...

hey, which road were you on? i must not pay attention when i drive. :) but anyway you can draw even when the road is a mess! that is a ...

hey! it's a great pic just as everyone said, and really should write a story and go a little bit more in depth this time. although, were you depressed? or ...

hi! this one is in need of some punctuation! and i don't know, but it almost seems that you just wrote some words down on this one. it didn't really ...

hi! :D i'm new here, but i've been writing poetry for awhile, and you are awesome! i felt everything you described and i felt as if it was happening to ...

this one was really- i don't know what to say, i just can't think of a word to describe this, except that it is a good piece of poetry. keep ...

hey, this one was good, but there is one stanza that i don't understand *quote Just leave me alone! Let me in peace! Its hard enough Without your persuasion piece* ...