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Re: Assassin's Rampage
That was totally awesome! Hi by the way. Your writing technique is soooo good. There is so much detail and I could actually see it happening. This could be turned ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Characters for The Triangle Effect
MC- Chrissy (Chris) Cantel Best Freinds- Annie Williams, Landon Banmore, Gab (Gabriella) Anster, and Derron O'Hare Crush- Everrett Crosby Parents- Warren Cantel, Denise Cantel Brother- Nat Cantel Sorr
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Guess the name of the user above you!
Nope! There's no "u" in my name. :smt016 And you weren't supposed to tell anyone! :smt021
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: The Scariest Things
thanks, i'll work on it.
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Hey all!
hi! :smt039 Welcome to YWS. I've only been a member for a little while, but I have still made some friends and posted some stuff really quickly. I'm not saying ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
Yes! Yes! I will love you! :smt055 *smiles* :smt003 9/10 I love kittens. :smt049
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Guess the name of the user above you!
Ummmm, just a guess, but I think..... Kelsey? Hahaha. :smt043 JK. Hey Kaylyn. Hobbies: reading, writing, acting, singing. :smt034 I seriously just want to know what you're going to come ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
very dark and somber. :smt090 8/10
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: The Scariest Things
hey, guys! just to let you know "gay" is not as in lesbian. it means happy. just saying so you wont get confused:)
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: The Scariest Things
I never want to lose you, But I know I will one day Sometimes the scariest things are true. I hope the skies will always be blue, But they always ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: How Could You?
Thanks for the critique, Snoink. I really need to improve on my poetry. But i will go over the poem and try to fit in some more details. Thanks again!
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Another Love Poem
hey, this one didn't really impress me. :smt102 it was good, but it needs to flow better, it almost seems like you forced yourself to put a line the doesn't ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Goodbye, my insane, beautiful love
I don't know how to reply to that, but i'll try. It was very clear that you were angry with your boyfriend and that you were leaving him, but the ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Frozen lakes and sugar cakes
I LOVE THIS ONE! :smt060 it is sooooooo sweet. It captures the childhood things and pairs them with things from adulthood. It flows and rhymes perfectly. A job well done. ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Dont Follow Me
hi! :smt039 this was really beautiful, and it doesn't need a thing changed. So you had better not touch it. :smt110 I loved this one, how she kept repeating to ...
Oct 30, 2008
