Theodorable

Aww, I love it! You did it perfectly, I haven't seen one of these poems in a long time, thanks for bringing it back. As always keep writing! P.S. If ...

Hey guys. Thanks for all the critiques, they really help. If you have any suggestions for anything i should add, then please post it. Thanks sooo much!

Nikki was so ashamed of herself, she wasn't suposed to use fire on anything until one of the older faeries told her the go ahead. She was surprised when she ...

9/10 Aww, soo sad.

Nikki looked around at the ground, everything was black. She had never meant for this to happen, now she would be in trouble with the earth faeries. "Crap!" "Hey, you ...

Name: Nikki Gender: Female Age: 16 Element: Fire other: Loves to play pranks on other creatures. This should work

8/10 Awesome!

Yes, I totally am! TUBM: Is going to a party sometime soon.

Okay, just a suggestion. Add "away" to the very last line so it rhymes with the one before it. It is a very good poem. It sort of reminds me ...

Wow, all I can say is just.... wow. This is a powerful poem. It is so true and it happens everday, parents need to realize that a child can be ...

That was really cute! It was good too. Though you might want to stay away from repeating the same line as many times as you did. Though in this one ...

The author Maggie Shayne has some good ones out. I have read Prince of Twilight and Twilight Hunger. (Both are really good) I love any book that has to do ...

No, I don't. I don't even know how to make them. TUBM: Loves videogames.

Banned because you can't think of a better signature.

7/10 Yeah, you're right. I do think you're nuts. (JK)