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Re: Theokrone (A small excerpt from my fantasy novel debut)
Thank you all for your comments, they were exceptionally helpful! Perhaps there is indeed a different approach that I must take in writing something such as this. Appararently it was ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI
Wow, this is the first play like work I've read on here and it was HILARIOUS! You have a way with dry humor that makes plays stand out more. I ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Theokrone (A small excerpt from my fantasy novel debut)
Chapter One ********** During the age of Theokrone, before the endless vegetation throughout the plains had grown from rich and tender soil, or the towering mountains of the north had ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: To You, Writer's Block
Yes it is a train of thought! Or more or less how I see writer's block when I personally have it... -The Written Chef
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: A Touchdown Too Late
Dear Critquers, Lolz...thanks for your input guys! It means a lot to finally have some comments on this. I wrote it the other night like between one and two, because ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Plunge
Why hello there Jane, I am who the peoples have started to call simply 'The Chef.' At this late hour I shall be one, experiencing my first flash fiction and ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Stupid writer's block.
Dear LadyP, I OMG know how you feel. My first work I submitted was about me and my darn writer's block. So the devotion to it is understood. It will ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: A Touchdown Too Late
A TOUCHDOWN TOO LATE “How long has it been, son…that you called your father? I’m sure he would like to hear from you! You know, when he was around he ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Hiya! Im new here :)
Hello there, and welcome to the fantastic world of writing!! My name is The Written Chef and I look forward to seeing work from you. This site is truly amazing ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Here it comes again
Dear RhaniGrace, Hello there this evening, my name is The Written Chef and others have started to call me just plain o' 'The Chef.' I have the pleasure of reviewing ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Review Day September 2010 Check-In
I believe now that the bear of myself has awoken from his slumber, that I should cook up a few as well! -The Written Chef
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: To You, Writer's Block
Thank You Moriah for a thoughtful critique! I am glad that I can change your mind about poetry once more, but really...I am no fan of it either. I wrote ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Camping
Hmmmmm... I can't seem to think where I wanna take this. While reading your poem, it sounds very smooth and sorta 'homey' at best. In a good way of course. ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: James, for Anne
Curious as much lol! It's not bad, but it is agreed that the thoughts are scattered. It's interesting at best, and if I was to ever get high in my ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: To You, Writer's Block
To You, Writer’s Block He sits there, eyes cringing, as he focuses on the blank paper. Envy. At this point in time, perhaps ‘he’ should have written… It is barren, ...
Sep 25, 2010
