TheWordsmith

Planning? Who needs planning? :) Seriously, though, I don't actually plan-- that makes the story boring to me, since I like to discover what happens along the way. I've learned, ...

Yeah, that really helped. Thanks!

It seems interesting. I liked how the characters were talking casually about mythical creatures. I have a question: Which world does this take place on? Earth itself, or merely an ...

Fist off, wow. "Hooked" seems like the right word.... But there were a few things that need improvement. I noticed a lot of run-on sentences, especially when someone was talking ...

Here's Part Three. This time, it's told from Sandy's point of view. The Institute, Part Three: Sandy It's not surprising that Willa doesn't like Hacking Basics; from what I've seen ...

Horserider already covered the main points, but I'd like to add a few things. 1. First Five Pages Even if you don't send it in with you're query, your first ...

It was good, but a bit confusing. If you're trying for the business letter approach, it would go something like this. The suggestions in asterisks are your choice, of course, ...

Here's my contribution: The main character is a mouse , named Despereaux. The comma makes it kind of stilted. He comes closer to hear the music better and the princess ...

I know I read Huck Finn a while ago, but I can't remember whether Mark Twain, through Huck, was a racist. Instead, I'll treat you to a definition on racism: ...

Wordsmith grins and leans back, sipping cider. "Turns out I was wrong...."

I thought Inkheart was boring. Don't get me wrong, it had amazing potential. It was just that I got a third of the way through the story and was like, ...

I just asked a computer expert and he said to use a recovery tool- maybe Norton's has one?- that will allow you to see all the sections of the file. ...

Well, as for the scientific aspects... There hasn't been an actual case like this so I don't know how accurate this is. He might have the ability to control lightning. ...

Sadly, I don't know either. I just wanted to say that nothing having to do with Lord of the Rings is stupid! Okay, I could probably think of a few ...

You didn't, like, install a new writing tool (like OpenOffice or Microsoft Word) did you? Or have you surfed the web a lot lately? If you've surfed a lot, you ...