TheWalkinDude

Name: (Real) John Brookside (Nick) Hobo Jack Apparent Age: 70 Gender: Male God of: sun, light, knowledge Powers: Ability to enact karma, both good and bad, on those deserving of ...

Life depends on nature. Nature Depends on life. Just wondering: is there a specific reason you capitalized "Depends"? To me, unless you have a specific reason for emphasizing that particular ...

Okay, first off, thanks guys for comments. Gotta love them, for better or worse, ehh? Anyways, for Ms. Freak up top, thanks, and yeah, I guess this is more or ...

This is a nice poem, Idraax. I really like the simplicity and the swaying rhythm. It kind of gives a sense that it should be read really slow and subtly, ...

-A Time, But no Place- For once in your life, Take it easy, Take a load off, 'Cause the news will Show you Life's might. What's Life and Time? They ...

Thanks guys for the words of encouragement. I always love it when people read things I write and share how they make them feel.

I'm gonna listen, dude. This sounds really cool. I'll also plan on calling in and reading something. Should be really sweet.

-Ash is Falling- Ash is falling. The fire burns nearby. How on Earth Can I catch her From her endless skydive? Ash is falling. I wish I could help. But ...

Thanks for the reviews, gals! I always love seeing what people think about anything I have written, especially my poetry, since I used to think poetry was pointless and didn't ...

-Me?- I am- That is- What for? Because. For whom it matters? I haven't a clue. For those who banter? Off to big Blue. My life is filled, With Music ...

You make me wonder, how does your mind work? Mine works fine yet you make me go berserk. Okay, these two lines ae good. I like this beginning, starting out ...

Thanks, rememberme! Uber awesome that my poem has generated this kind of response! I've got another poem I wrote in my economics class that I think I may post, just ...

Thanks for the replies, you guys! I wasn't sure this poem would generate much but a little banter or riff-raff, but seems people actually do like it. Okay, first off, ...

Hehehe! Oh, man, I had to get off the floor laughing to put in this comment. I must say, this is a very amusing piece of work. I don't think ...

Laugh at me if you want to Hide from me if you can Let me sink into you Like quick sand This line is a little bit akward. Maybe try ...