TheWalkinDude

And then he did the most wonderfully heartbreaking thing. I didn't really like this opening sentence. I would suggest maybe changing it, though not starting on an "And" next time. ...

My sweet , he whispered in my ear Fingers on my temples bare Good enough to eat , he’ll leer And run his hands throughout my hair. Your skin as ...

I feel it. The eyes of society I like this just because I've always had this kind of thought that society was like a living, breathing person, the eyes being ...

In all honesty, this was rather harsh towards the masses of men. Of course, I did like some of the arguments (mostly because I'm more girl than boy anymore), especially ...

Wow, man, this is some pretty radical stuff you got goin'. Must say, though, pretty impressive. I like how you approached everything, despite it being a joke, so scientifically. It's ...

... Give me a moment to compose myself... Egh-erm... This is quite simply the BEST thing I have ever read on YWS. I loved this! Mostly because I couldn't stop ...

I'm a little confused on this: Is he flying to fight the evil? Or is he thinking about evil while flying? Or is he just having a deep thought while ...

First question: Is this a prologue? Second: If so, will there be more? I thought this was a really cute short story or story cut. Especially the little vixen part. ...

This poem reminds me sitting in the family room with my family, me off to the side, them on the couch, watching T.V., talking, laughing, with me still to the ...

Image is my life, I only go skin deep. Without a brain, I'm looking good but I find I cannot speak. I liked how you opened the poem with a ...

Can we fall in love this way? I really like things that start off with a question. To me, it makes me think, "What can this mean? Why does the ...

Must say, I like the simplicity of this, but I'm just a tad confused on it, though that may just be me who thinks that. As far as rhythm and ...

-Age of Mentality- I am now free Now yours And only yours. Please, take care of me. Feed me and love me And help me grow to see How much ...

Ahh, giving. Such a great feeling to give. So, for my gift to you, help and guidance for your contest entry: This is for the December contest! It took me ...

I'm not really sure what the directive of the discussion is at this point. I've read only the first page. But I'd like to add this in, even if it's ...