TheWalkinDude

Wow. Simply, wow. If I had read this in person with you, I would have stood up and very slowly started clapping until miraculously a loud round-of-applause started sounding off ...

For a poem written on the draw, must say, well-done. I really liked this poem, mostly because I felt that connection to the main narrator. I'm a bit of a ...

Well, I must say, this is different. I'm still a little confused about the subject and the idea of this. Are you planning on expanding on it sometime? Are you ...

Wow, very nice poem. Well, nice as in you keep on top of the subject the whole way through. There wasn't any squandering around or just flip-flopping, which is always ...

Howdy, y'all! What's hap'nin'? I'm TheWalkinDude, otherwise known as Zac! I live to learn and learn to live. Survival's the name of the game, and I play it well. If ...

Well, must say, now I think I want to read this book! It sounds to me like a good book about an artistic woman who got pregnant and then left ...

Great job on this little one-shot, dude! Great little piece you got here. My main concern is that going from man to stranger back and forth is confusing. Half the ...

I have trouble remembering Every time that I cheat , Every time that I lied , And thought I was neat . This stanza confuses me grammatically. When I first ...

Okay, honestly, I'm having a bit of trouble grasping the idea of this poem. Maybe a love that never came? I don't know. I understand it seems that it is ...

Very ominous. A good poem to read slowly. A question though: through the whole poem, is it told as the snowman being the narrator? Or is that just the ending? ...

Okay, first off, nice job on a poem that actually gave me the creeps. That's a hard thing to accomplish, as even E.A.P. and Stephen King sometimes struggle with that. ...

The Feeling of Christmas Russia for vacation... Maybe not everyone's choice for the best spot in the world but , hey, I like snow, and it has always been one ...

Inspiration, where'd you go?! I thought that maybe, you'd like to know : (I'm adding a colon here because I think it reads better and looks better than the dots ...

Job well done! I love this short story to death! It made me laugh so much! I was really pondering what could be in the little box up to the ...

Haha! Love it, man! Although short and a little confusing on parts, this is still hysterical! I think this would be a lot better though if you lengthened it up ...