TheUnexpected

Hey Laur, I love the story and all but who is Matt, so far you didn't mention any Matt so i am kind of confused???

I loved the idea of the story, but i didn't quite understand it. I think it needs a bit more characters, oh and you shouldn't give so much away just ...

Hello, I do have one question; i am not sure if anyone else asked this before me because i didnt have time to read all the past comments, how come ...

Its amazing i love it there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes but is there a finish to this story or do i have to make it up? Let ...