TheTruthLiesWithin

This is a poem about how through out the years we went to school on Valentines day, what we did, how we acted, and what we wished. It is about ...

Hello! Here I am for a review :) First, this looks really good so far, let's get onto corrections, shall we? Chapter One Part One Everyone has that messed up ...

Hey! :) First off, welcome to YWS! Hope you'll like it here :D I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer today :) --If you haven't yet noticed, I love ...

Hey! So, I'm pretty sure Kafka pointed it all out for the corrections I would suggest. So I'll leave you with this: Here there's nothing capitalized at all, and it's ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth, here for a full review on your novel! Let's start, shall we? PS: Don't be intimidated by all the red, it's all small things that ...

Whoa lots of posts! Haha, I shall review :D Let's start with Said Disease , shall we? I think if my cheeks were slit, and handcuffs locked inside, hooking my ...

Hey Dudette :) Truth here to review! So first off, I would like to point out how you are narrating in past tense, and keeping it quite constant... This one, ...

Ok, not my strongest piece but had a lot of writers block. Plus I dont know if you count this as romantic or not. Anyway hope you enjoy! :) Everyone ...

Hello Storygirl :) I'm Truth and I shall review your poem! My famous last words were in the witching hour, too scared too speak , comma I sat back. With ...

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! Let's start with the nitpicking, shall we? Numbers on both sides were dwindling fast as the battle raged on. It wouldn't be ...

Hello :) Truth here for a review! A grain of sand, a drop of blood - the bindings of a world forsaken by the lost, taken by the wealthy, and ...

Hello :) Truth here for a review! So first, I must say that this is really good for a first draft. I miss what once had been, crave what will ...

Alright, so I don't like posting two chapters together, but these two are very short and follow each other.. Tear it apart if you want :) -Truth- Chapter 9 I ...

YAY first one :D Name: Kaylee General height, and build (e.g lanky, fat): Tall -5'8'' or 9''- lean General age: 17 years old Hair color/eye color/race: curly brown hair with ...

Hello Dragon :) Truth here to review! This looks very promising, I like. I would only like to point out that you use a period to seperate your narration from ...