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Re: Tormented Chapters 3-5
Chapter 4 Inside the library , comma we took a table behind the back of the shelves, concealing ourselves off from the rest of the grayish colour scheme of the ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Tormented Chapters 3-5
Hey there :) Truth here to review! First off... the format is horrible. It's just horrible. I'll reformat as I review, if you don't mind :) Chapter 3 Mr. Morgan ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Art Dump #1
Hey! These aren't as bad as you think they are :) They're really good actually! My least favorite would have to be 2nd one but I love the 1st and ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Grace Happens (1)
Hello! Truth here to review :) Authors Note: It's a bit rough, and a bit small for my liking, but rip it to shreds as best you can. :D When ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: 1. Tiptoeing over the edge. (Redrafted)
Hello there :) Truth here for a review! August 29th 2009 It was sort of systematic how she climbed over the railings. She had done it so many times before ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: MAPS!
Hello :) Wow, these are pretty well detailed, aren't they? It's great, because you know exactly where is your stuff and this makes it even more accurate when you write ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: The Joy In His Voice
Hey Lily :) Here for a review! I watch him, dazed, in the silence of the greatness of his music filled is bare yet , comma he has filled it. ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Words
Hello :) How do you make a word tell a story Of a unexplained murder , comma Or a thrilling adventure ? How do you make one syllable Shout a ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Haemophilia
Oops, missed the 'he' in there.. Alright so being a guy, forget all that thing about periods and all :)
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Haemophilia
Hey there :) My mom's cousin has Haemophilia, and we are also studying it in my bio class so I'll try to help you a bit. First, the base... that ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Losing
Hello there :) Truth here for a review! As that last breath escaped your lips, its ashen smoke forming in swirling rings , comma Comma here, and not period because ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Black And White Roses
Hello there! First off, happy Valentines Day! Alright, first one I like. It makes a good impression on what's to come. I love the dark and the light playing on ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: (deleted)
Hello there :) Truth here for a review! The great big dog lowered into a play bow , comma then scampered out of the way , comma as Phillip kicked ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: UNTITLED - name still needed (part 1)
Hey Flux :) So I started reading this and was totally absorbed by second paragraph, it was like a movie in my head. I really love the way you are ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: The Storm Comes
Hello! Truth here for a review :) Hey guys! So, Just to warn you, I suck at poetry. Out of everything in this world, poetry is the thing I'm the ...
Feb 8, 2011
