TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello, So I won't correct this, for the simple fact that it would take away from the message inside. And what a beautiful message it was. These are timeless themes, ...

I never expected that my Friday morning would turn into yet another romantic roller coaster . Since Monday I hadn’t heard from Ben, so I thought it’d be best to ...

Hey, Truth here for a review :) PS: All my comments and corrections are made as I read and are only suggestions. You are the master :P ***Please note, this ...

Hey there :) Truth here for a review! Cast out all thine enemies. Ye shall utterly destroy all the places, wherein the nations harbor terrorists , comma and dwell in ...

Hey there :) I agree with you, we really should take pictures of things we find beautiful when we have the chance. Picture 1 is a truly beautiful lake, I ...

Hello Jenny :) First off, I'll back up Other here by saying to me it is definitely a child. With only looking at the eyes, it could be a woman, ...

Heyya! Truth here for a review, Ben Williamson was a mistake. He found this out as a young boy, living in a dingy, red-brick-against-grey sky type of building in Bedford, ...

Everyone has that messed up part of their family, whether it was their M om’s side or their D ad’s side, or even their grandparents’. Since you are starting with ...

Hey again :) After redrafting & rearranging parts of the novel various chapters have now been edited and moved about and I've also had to new chapters to link some ...

Hey again :) Again, awesome reviews above, so I'll stick with overall. Overall, I really like the change of POV, it's more personnal that way. I really love :) Also, ...

Hey Amie :) Truth here as requested! The others above have already made amazing reviews, so excuse me if I've got no nitpicks for you. You did an amazing job ...

Forgive me, it's been a while since I posted. This is one of my small poems... Don't know what to do of this.. So you tell me :) PS I'm ...

Hey there :) Truth here to review! Wow. I really like this. Amazing. I can relate to this so much and you definitely expressed the feelings very well. It's not ...

Hey Wicked :) This looks very promising. It's well written, intense and just leaves me a bunch of question to be answered. All the other above pointed out the mistakes ...

Chapter 5 The school day was almost over, only biology left, and after a quick stop by my dorm to exchange books, I headed to class. Gabbe and I arrived ...