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Whoa! You got me addicted here :D But unfortunately, I have to say it too... Perfect! I love, love, love this. The grammar was pretty good. I only saw some ...

Hmm, I notice almost everyone here writes in silence. I always have my music on when I write (and when I don't, actually :)) Now I realize it's very distracting ...

Hey JDawn! Beautiful story :) It makes me think of the mornings when I wake with this warm feeling and just want to pretend I never woke up. Sometimes I ...

Hey Forgotpzwrd! The story itself has potential. You could definitely do something great with it! Maybe tweak with it a bit but the idea is pretty good :) I like ...

Thank you! I didn't know what to put for the I went with that. It's boring but I couldn't think of anything else :? I'm open to suggestions.

Thanks for uploading the new link :D

This might be terrible, I don't really do poetry that much because I can never find rhymes but I just had these words come to me and I couldn't ignore ...

Hey Rascalover! The poem is really beautiful. I quite enjoyed it :) The words are well chosen and you describe really well what love is! We need it to survive ...

The poem really isn't bad, it's actually pretty good. You use good words to express the feelings, and like some mentioned above, the imagery was pretty good. I can imagine ...

Hey! This is a beautiful picture. I must say black and white photographs just speak to me. They're just so...inspiring? I can't really find the right word :) I love ...

I must say I may be addicted to music, if that is possible :) My Ipod is playing all the time I'm not sleeping or in class and I'm the ...

Hey! I'm here again to review :) My lungs are burning, but I don’t dare open my mouth. His words have me stumped, and I take a moment to look ...

Hey CharlotteGrace, First off, I thought the beginning with all the descriptions was a good idea, it gives us a bit of a backup to what's coming. The plot is ...

Haha yeah, okay, I know it's pretty basic but don't worry, things are coming up soon ;) This is just the intro to situate you guys to were she is ...

Hey, I'm sorry, I only just saw the little message at the beginning... please don't pick a hissy fit! :? I didn't know that that was your point and now, ...