TheTruthLiesWithin

Hey! You aren't that bad a poet, I actually quite enjoyed it :) The meaning is really good, admitting we are wrong and say "I'm sorry" is something we, humans, ...

Hey Shear! Another great chapter :) I disagree with Sierra here, I think that parts like this, even if they don't have any big events, have to be there in ...

Hey! Here as promised to review :) First I have to say I really loved the land of dreams you made up when he's drugged! The descriptions are beautiful, the ...

I knew something was up when I walked up to my house. My mom’s car was in the driveway. I thought back to the last time she was here before ...

Wow, amazing! It is definitely sad...I feel all weird inside and heartbroken :( The first part, it relates to something that happened close to me so much it made my ...

Hey again! I re-read the story and I love the changes you've made :) It flows better and it's easier for us to follow. Good job! -Truth-

Hey Wickedwonder! First, I think you can go pretty far with this. It's defenietly interesting and I want to know what going to happen next! Your writting is great :) ...

Hey Hibiscus! I actually really, really like both :) The first one is cute because it's like a rainbow but it's all smudged and unperfect, unlike what rainbow should be. ...

Hey James B! So this is intriguing! There's so many unawsered questions... what happens after? Why are the men fallowing him? Why is the message so important? The story line ...

White Washed by Agust Burns Red -first time I listen to it and i love it :D

I have never talked to you since I signed up but I thought you gave very nice reviews :) And your name is cute :)

Whoa. I really like this :) The idea is great and it's short and sweet. Ofcourse it's lacking of "poetic elements", if I may say it like this. But, I ...

Hey Blackrose! The plot is really great. I enjoy reading your story a lot :) The descriptions are also really great, I can see what's happening in my head. The ...

Wow, I like this. A lot. I never understood why people love summer better than winter, it's so much quieter, eerie and calm. I guess I have to like it ...

Hey EchoSong! First, I want to say this little bit, no matter how tiny it was, picked at my curiosity. The plot doesn't describe anything really... maybe less is more? ...