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Hey Wickedwonder! I thought the narration was actually done really well for 2nd person :) I don't like them much either but I think you did it well because, for ...

Hey! First, I'm really curious of what will happen next! I've got some nitpicks too...mostly some little typos. The words sounded meaningless, like I could care less. Like she could ...

Hey Forestqueen! I'm here to review as promised :) This story is good. I've studied ancient Greece and so, while reading it, I was making all the links :) There ...

Hey! While reading this, I could totally relate to this! It's pretty much everything I'm thinking... even though I am only 2 years away, schools are already stressing our decisions ...

I won't be there for a bit but I've done 4 and I'll try to do 5 more tonight!

Hey! I'm here to review the second chapter :) Nipticks: It took over an hour for us to check in and get to our gate. We didn't have to wait ...

Hey again! Here for part two :) Again, Pink covered most of it. I've got only one niptick... The earthy smell of the stew is making is filling the room ...

Hey there! Pink pretty much covered it all there but I want to say that Iiked that your characters are different. Sure they are a bit flat but I like ...

Hey! I've haven't read the short story either but I think I will now :) I liked the peom very much. It's light and funny (even if I will understand ...

Hey!First, I want to say I really like the story you are telling, I'm curious of what's going to happen next! Now, on to the review :) Some things I ...

I have shivers... That's all I got to say. Keep it up, it's wonderful :) -Truth-

Hey! This is really short but straight to the point. I like it :) You might want to consider continuing this into something else? Sometimes writting about something you lived ...

Hey LiveLaughLove! My first impression was that it was really short. I almost didn't read it but then I thought it wouldn't take me long so why not? It's a ...

Hey there! I'm going to review now :) The first one is absolutly gorgeous! Do I even have to mention it? (I

Hey! Nice poem there, I enjoyed it :) It was quite choppy, which, in my opinion, adds to the overall tone but I had some touble to read it a ...