TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello Ofir! It's been a while since I've reviewed, pardon my rustiness. I'll start with some little things I noticed. Except in woolen hats ; they make my hair puffy ...

Hey Dannie :) I really loved this poem. The flow is great, the vocabulary is rich and the rhymes don't seem forced. I can relate to this a lot but ...

Hello there :) I loved this piece. The emotions in it were very intense and, even if it's short, we get into it. The overall story is a bit blurry ...

Here it is... my amazing review, vaporized. Well, that was mean. So instead of going through this for a second time, I'll just do a fastforward version, okay? Here it ...

Author's note: Chapter 4 is out! I took longer than I thought but chapter 5 should be on his way now that school is a bit better :) I slammed ...

Hello there :) So, first impression... it looks very long. I know you'Ve got a lot to say but it discouraged me a bit. But, as I read on, I ...

Oh rap! I wasn't expecting this :) It's good, I'm doing my own little beat in my head to go with it. You've got the right swagger :) Keep writing! ...

Something I scribbled in class...it's far from perfect. Feedback would be appreciated! Dark sister, Come to me tonight. The wall can be overcome easily; My blood is yearning for your ...

Hey James! So I've done the first part already. Here to review the rest :) First, I'll do a quick grammar and nitpicks check So, to get a silver coin ...

Hey this isn't horrible at all :) I liked the theme very much. Sometimes people really need it and others, they just throw away our help. I loved the way ...

Hey Hannah! Here to review the overall story :) Overall, I really liked it. It seemed light and weird at first but it all accumulated to this ending, which I ...

Hey kitrosemon! Now, I'm a bit confused... is it werewolves? Vampires? Some kind of beasts? Or just weird Immortals? Please clarify this in the next chapter/this one. I've found some ...

Hey Broken, I'm here to review! First off, I've got some nitpicks, The sun was beat ing down on her dark hair, causing her to walk faster, which exhausted her ...

Hey again! I think Navita has mentioned everything :) I only got to say the plot is slowly unfolding and we are learning a bit more on what's going to ...

Hey Lukan! This is a beautiful poem. I really liked it :) I loved the rhythm it had and I loved the repetition in the first two stanzas, transferring from ...