TheTruthLiesWithin

Hey there! First, welcome to YWS! I'm Truth and I'll review your poem today :) I want to write a love song , T o take your breath away . ...

Moonflowers are my new obsession.. it's just a little something on their blooming :) Hanging lifeless to the ground, You had woken up so gently. You bloomed under the ivory ...

Hey Carly :) Truth again to review! It was clear that Raleigh liked Archer too but she was not my concern. This should be past tense like the rest of ...

Hey :) I'll do a quick review since lots of people already replied. When I hear your soothing voice, I smile and feel rejoice d . past? Every time we ...

Hey again :) Alrighty, let's do this again! I felt it. the pain , I mean. Just for a second. I remember, hearing her cry the sight of the blue ...

Hey again :) Here to review chapter 2! It had been a couple days This should be in past tense, as the rest of the chapter/story. “Yeah, and I’ve got ...

Hey there! Fist off, welcome to YWS, hope you'll like it here :) Now, onto the review, I felt it. T he pain , I mean. Only for a second. ...

Hey Katty :) If the world wasn't so vast, and my house , not as clean I would've been here on another morning, W alking in quiet dawn to see ...

Hey there :) C'est bon de voir quelqu'un d'autre qui parle francais! Haha I'm Truth and I'll review this chapter tonight :) I'll be starting with nitpicks, some grammar mistakes ...

Hey A shallow puddle , N ear the middle of the road . The clouds were now tired , F rom crying so much This stanza seems a bit broken ...

Hello Soul :) I'll start with some nitpicks and point out some things, just to improve your grammar skills and such. Fall was soon be knocking at our front door, ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth and I'll be your reviewer for the evening. First off with the nitpicks... She walked around aimlessly circled the room, looking for something to read ...

Hey sister :) This is beautiful... I don't think I've got anything else to say, it left me speechless. -Truth-

Hey there! I'll start with the nitpicks and finish up with the pleasant part :) We headed down to the club, me wincing every step, trying to figure out how ...

Hello there Winie :) Stooping, I rinsed my dirty hands in the short sink, feeling the droplets sink into my skin, cleansing it. Water doesn't really get absorbed by our ...