TheTruthLiesWithin

So that’s a yes , comma indefinitely A heartbeat, make it one, two and three Love this! You closed your tired eyes And open them to my own uncertainty Is ...

Whoa! That's all I have to say, Whisperer got pretty much everything there :) Keep it up! -Truth-

Let it slip through your fingers. Let it fall and crash to the ground. The glass is already shattered, Broken beyond repair. Why don’t you throw a match in? Watch ...

Love this entirely. Keep on writing this beautiful things! -Truth-

Hello :) I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer tonight! Let's start with the most unpleasant... “Hurry up; if I miss seeing the new guys I’m so going to ...

Hey again! "Alyss!" roared Mrs. Skye. Everyone, including me, jumped their of our seats 'Our' should be 'their', because everyone is a singular noun, it represents a group. One could ...

I want to apologize first for the cutting. I know it bothers some people, and I'm sorry if it did but writing about it doesn't mean I do it, but ...

Hey You :) "'Thanks for seating me next to Alexandria' what the hell was that?" I asked. I had turned my back on Charlie , comma "You didn't actually have ...

Hello NewDivides :) I'm Truth! Alright, I'll start with the unpleasant. These are my comments, suggestions, corrections, anything :) She could barely see the full moon, much less the dark ...

Hello Poet! This is good :) No mistakes I can see, only that capital you missed there, Just put me in a pet carrier. Because a lion without his roar ...

Hey T :) I've only got some nitpicks, Their slight flutter of them soothes me; There's no need of using 'of them' in there since you already used 'their' My ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth! First impression, this looks long. Second, you didn't write anything in your spoiler! Haha, let's move on. I'll start with the nitpicks, as I always ...

Hey there :) I'm Truth and I'll review you tonight! First off, the format is really bad... It discourages me a lot, i was almost not goin gto read it ...

When I got home, Mom wasn’t there but there was a big pile of flyers from her work on the counter with a yellow post it on top. It read: ...

Hey there Jenth :) I'll be as harsh as I can! “Yes, Uncle Kronos , comma ” Taisu said, putting away his restlessness. This should be a comma, not a ...