TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello there, Truth here for a review :) His foot trudged forth further into the deep; mere steps to his endless journey. I knew him. Before he Like Crook said ...

Under a tree is where I sit. Under this tree is where I wait. Under my tree is where I ponder, about my looming, inevitable fate. Under a sky is ...

Hey again :) I wasn't sure about the scene thing so I went straight to part 2... Recalling Afternoon. Summer break. It's hot and boring. No one will ever live ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth here to review! This is a bit hard to read because there's some mistakes here and there so I'll correct as I go and explain ...

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! Drawing # 1: It looks nice, but considering it's supposed to be a girl... then I would suggest you add some plump ...

I say both because I like having the book in my hands and all... but the eBook is a greener version. With all the books I go through, if I ...

Hello! First off, happy review day! I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer today :) I'll start with my corrections and suggestions in red and my comments in bold, ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer tonight! Comments in bold, corrections and suggestions in red :) “Don’t cry, Nemzi , comma ” Papa said. I ...

The Roads from My Door The path , comma it goes from my doorstep, This would sound better if these were two separate lines Onto open roads and ways, It ...

Hey :) I'm Truth, nice to meet you, and I shall review your work today. First of all, pardon my rustiness, I haven't been on here for a while. So ...

The red tears that spill from my eyes, are filled with boiling blood and painless lies, as if I were bleeding with emotionless sorrow. As if I a was fearless ...

Hey! I'm back :) I woke up later that night . W hen? I wasn't really sure. I felt as if someone was watching me... I instantly shot up in ...

Me again :) Let's start? We traveled the rest of the day, I hadn't had any idea that it was this big... unless we've been going around in circles that ...

Hello! Happy review day :) I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer tonight! I didn't know the woods very well, I just knew how to get to this one ...

Hello sistaah :) Saw you posted some new work and thought I should check it out. Here I am, watch out! Sixteen for the use of one swear word... You ...