TheTruthLiesWithin

Whoa nice drawing! Love it, particularly the leaf designs on the tunic. He looks very evil and dangerous. Nicely done! Keep on drawing :) -Truth-

Hello there Nissa :) Truth here for a review! First, I'll start with the nitpicks... what can I say, I'm a nitpicker! Silently, I exhaled seeing my foggy breath puff ...

AN: Alright... This free verse is something I wrote today. I did not follow any of the elements whatsoever, no rhymes, not rhythm, just words, up for your interpretation.This might ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth! Alright, let's get on with that review, shall we? May 2010 Why those-them ? My face flushes with anger and this time , comma I ...

For everything there is a season For poppy's die ,comma and poppy's bloom Whether fate's a myth , comma or reason For everything there is a season LOVED this. A ...

Hey Twinzy :) I know this is not meant to be corrected, but you know me... I could not restrain myself from it! xO So here it is.. my corrections! ...

Hey again! Sorry it took me so long to come back... I think the others pretty much said everything I wanted to point out. It's good you have been putting ...

Hey there :) I used to spend hours staring at that picture, as though by looking at her , comma when she was a ten year old , comma I ...

Hey Jenn :) Here as promised! Let's start, shall we? First, some nitpicks.. You would still see her blue walls and white carpet, her bed with the tempurpedic mattress and ...

Our coach called us up to the bench to explain the game plan. We were to keep our force in the defensive, since they had a strong offensive. I would ...

I opened my locker, grabbed my basket ball uniform, my shoes and my bag and locked it up again. Tonight would be the most important game of the season; we ...

This is good, I can actually see the metaphor pretty good, after I read your little note there :) I love the words you chose and all of it, really. ...

Death lives through Me I'm debating weather this would sound better with the line above? and humanities sins. We dine together sometimes, And rid all of the has-beens. A world ...

Hey there! I'm Truth, nice to meet you :) I'll start with the nitpicks.. About three weeks ago, my mom had told me we'd be leaving for Florida. You missed ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth, and I shall review your work tonight! Alright, let's start with the unpleasant, the nitpicks... A single guard ran by, puffing hard and searching for ...