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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I Am Not A Monster Afterall

    Hello there :) Wow, this is intense, isn't? I love the emotion of this, it's so anguished and... almost freaky. I love the style, even if it's really choppy, and ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Patience chapter 2

    Hey there :) I'm Truth, here for a review! I'm sorry, it might look very intimidating with all this red, but no worries, it's nothing too big. All of my ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Colors

    Colors I went into the kitchen counter got myself another hour and gave half of it to you. Love this :) I sat there looking at the detail in the ...

    Jan 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Was a mistake.

    Eyes briefly meeting Hands sliding down my back My heart pulsing rapidly This angle of attack Lips touching abrasively Bodies demanding passion Words whispered with desire And meaningful passion With ...

    Jan 13, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Drawing Hands

    Hands are definitely the hardest human part to draw. But these aren't bad they are pretty good, actually. Like Dierde said above, spacing is the hard thing. My favorite would ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Fate - Chapter 1: Broken Glass

    Hello! :) I'm Truth, nice to meet you! On with the review? I'll start with some nitpicks and corrections I suggest. Broken Glass Chapter 1 Broken glass is always an ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)

    Wow, I completely love this. It's awesome! Love how serious and intense it is. Keep on writing! -Truth-

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Balance - Chapter Two :: Cold

    Hey there :) Truth here to review! I turned and looked at the man called Zain, confused by his refusal. Hadn't he wanted to be free? Hadn't he wanted to ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The truth in the lie

    Wow, I LOVE this! So beautiful, and perfect in my eyes. Keep on writing! Question... Can I quote this? -Truth-

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)

    Heyy Twinzy :) I'll do this fast, just to correct things and polish it all so it can be at its greatest! It was true however that he had been ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Unicorns VS Zombies

    Hello there :) Truth here! Sorry I only got some nitpicks, I can't keep myself from correcting. Their numbers were low but they were sent to the zombie filled earth ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter Four

    NOTE: The format is terrible, I know, it YWS not me, I swear. Present Day “Anya! Nick! Breakfast!” I called outside. Nick was teaching Anya how to put spiral on ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Golden Wings- chapter 8

    Alright, this chapter is short as well, but I'm trying to keep this easy and pleasant for readers to follow :) I'll try posting more soon. And for those who ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Away

    Hey! I'm back here, as promised. :) This might be a bit long... I'm a nitpicker :) So here I go! Whatever it was, I watched her with intent as ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Alice in Wonderland--uncoloured illustration

    ALICE! :o Haha, I think you should definitely colour, or at least make it a tad bit darker, it'll bring out the shapes :) I shall review.. the best I ...

    Jan 7, 2011


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