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Re: I Am Not A Monster Afterall
Hello there :) Wow, this is intense, isn't? I love the emotion of this, it's so anguished and... almost freaky. I love the style, even if it's really choppy, and ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Patience chapter 2
Hey there :) I'm Truth, here for a review! I'm sorry, it might look very intimidating with all this red, but no worries, it's nothing too big. All of my ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Colors
Colors I went into the kitchen counter got myself another hour and gave half of it to you. Love this :) I sat there looking at the detail in the ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Was a mistake.
Eyes briefly meeting Hands sliding down my back My heart pulsing rapidly This angle of attack Lips touching abrasively Bodies demanding passion Words whispered with desire And meaningful passion With ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Drawing Hands
Hands are definitely the hardest human part to draw. But these aren't bad they are pretty good, actually. Like Dierde said above, spacing is the hard thing. My favorite would ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Fate - Chapter 1: Broken Glass
Hello! :) I'm Truth, nice to meet you! On with the review? I'll start with some nitpicks and corrections I suggest. Broken Glass Chapter 1 Broken glass is always an ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)
Wow, I completely love this. It's awesome! Love how serious and intense it is. Keep on writing! -Truth-
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Balance - Chapter Two :: Cold
Hey there :) Truth here to review! I turned and looked at the man called Zain, confused by his refusal. Hadn't he wanted to be free? Hadn't he wanted to ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: The truth in the lie
Wow, I LOVE this! So beautiful, and perfect in my eyes. Keep on writing! Question... Can I quote this? -Truth-
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)
Heyy Twinzy :) I'll do this fast, just to correct things and polish it all so it can be at its greatest! It was true however that he had been ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Unicorns VS Zombies
Hello there :) Truth here! Sorry I only got some nitpicks, I can't keep myself from correcting. Their numbers were low but they were sent to the zombie filled earth ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Four
NOTE: The format is terrible, I know, it YWS not me, I swear. Present Day “Anya! Nick! Breakfast!” I called outside. Nick was teaching Anya how to put spiral on ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Golden Wings- chapter 8
Alright, this chapter is short as well, but I'm trying to keep this easy and pleasant for readers to follow :) I'll try posting more soon. And for those who ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Away
Hey! I'm back here, as promised. :) This might be a bit long... I'm a nitpicker :) So here I go! Whatever it was, I watched her with intent as ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Alice in Wonderland--uncoloured illustration
ALICE! :o Haha, I think you should definitely colour, or at least make it a tad bit darker, it'll bring out the shapes :) I shall review.. the best I ...
Jan 7, 2011
