TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello there :) I'm Truth, here for a review. the angel nobody appreciated, sits alone in the park, Since the rest is in present tense, I would recommend staying with ...

Hello :) Truth here, nice to meet you. Alright, onto the review... Your off-pitch laugh carried itself through the dying and decaying trees. This was paradise. A dead forgotten place, ...

Hey :) Truth here for a review! First off... The verb tenses is changing are changing quite a bit in there... red= present, blue= past My feet hit the pavement ...

Hey there :) Truth here for a review! Alright, this is pretty good photography :) First one: I love that one. The foggy light is nice, the shadows are okay ...

Hello there :) I like those pictures, these are nice flowers. The first one would have to be my favorite :) The second one looks a bit confusing to me... ...

Here lies the tale, Of a girl long ago, Rest in pieces , comma young lady, It ' s payment you owe. Young girl of nineteen, Only daughter of three, ...

Hello! Truth here for a review :D If you don't mind I'll start with some of my nitpicking and corrections. All of them are suggestions, after all, you are the ...

Nice poem there, it's perfect! I have no criticism :) Good job on the imagery and all of that. Keep on writing! -Truth-

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! Alright, first thought... this looks long. On with nitpicks, I'll correct and suggest as I go. Though her coworkers adored me, and ...

Here for a review? Suuuure. :) I quoted it for you. It's alright, you can say it, 'Thank you Truth! You're making my life so much easier'. Yeah, I know, ...

Hello there :) Truth here to review! The next morning, Liz woke to a gentle massaging on her shoulders , comma “Mmmmm.” You mean, massage? “Good morning,” Jem whispered into ...

Hey, I love this :) The colors don't clash all that much... The things I love most: The hair and the cute face :D The things you could improve: Uh, ...

Hey there :) Truth here to review! First off with corrections... There has to be a balance in the band ; There cannot be 17 flutes and 3 trumpets. A ...

Hey Liam :) Nice drawings! 1st one: One of my favorites, really cute and well done. The only thing is maybe retrace the lines of their bodies because it's a ...

Red Ribbons She sees her , Soft white skin, The soft blue veins , That mark a way , Beneath her skin . In her pale white wrist, She feels ...