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  • Other Poetry Re: Waterfalls -Exam, need help-

    So I haven't posted on this site for some time, or even, written poetry for that matter... So this might turn out completely horrible. This poem is one for my ...

    Jan 22, 2012
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter 2, Elle *Rewritten*

    Hello again :) Here for chapter two! “You do not know about this war, my dear?” the elder asks. “No, I don’t know anything about this war. Just today, my ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Elle, Chapter 1 *Rewritten*

    Hello there :) I'm Truth and I shall attempt to review this. I haven't been on her in a while so forgive me for the mediocre review that's coming... With ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Take A Chance Part 2

    Daaaawwwwwhhhh. That's all I have to say :3 Keep on drawing those characters, I find them well to my taste! And if you could find one real-life one, then uh ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel?

    Awh yes, I shall shamelessly plug my novel in here... In a short time, Kaylee received everything she ever wanted but it all came crumbling down on that Night. Now, ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Retards Attempting Poetry :)

    Haha, this was funny. I liked it :) Great take on rap! Enjoyable, Keep it up! -Truth-

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Take A Chance- 11

    No comments on this... I shall review! I woke up with a weird feeling in my stomach. Rose was still sleeping beside me. I didn’t remember when we had gotten ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Twisted Vines Chapter 2

    Hello! Truth here for a review :) Chapter 2: Hundreds of Miles away Laila Hundreds of miles away from Corrigan , comma a young girl stepped out of the shower ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Red Stilettos(Title Pending) Chapter 1- Council

    Hello there :) I'm Truth, nice to meet you! I shall review this chapter of yours. Comments in bold, corrections/suggestions in red. Keep in mind that anything I change in ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Crepuscule

    Wow this was great. I really like your style of writing :) The only thing is that the sentences seemed to stretch on and on, like Kels said above... some ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Golden Wings- Chapter 11

    it's definitely been a while since I posted... mostly because this is the boring part of the novel... all setting it up, so if you can, just bear with me ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: April Showers

    I like this a lot :) The lines are really gorgeous, with the overall dark feeling. The watercolor makes a nice background as well, printer paper or no printer paper. ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: My Hope

    Hello there :) Truth here for a review! One human is born, Many others killed. One creature loved, Others destroyed. I really love how you started this. Take some, give ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Harmony

    A voice in the dark, It sings of hope, blossoming in our hearts. A voice, above all, It sings of peace, lighting up the sky. A voice, so sweet and ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Adiston Drive - Chapter Two

    Happy review day to you :) I'm Truth and I shall review this chapter of yours today. First I want to point out that your novel isn't linked together... and ...

    Jun 26, 2011


A good artist should be isolated. If he isn't isolated, something is wrong.
— Orson Welles