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Re: The Uprising-Prologue
Like Uber said, this is a good idea for a story, although it seems a little half-baked. While Uber focused on specifics, I'll take a more broad approach to the ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: Cimber
This was a great story, albeit the hidden meanings were lost to my weak mind. One thing I don't like is introducing a character, have them there to do something ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Dead
Usually, I love short stories. Stories that end up being verbose (like my own) start to bore me; just get on with the story! But this was too brief. If ...
Sep 10, 2008