TheThing

Like Uber said, this is a good idea for a story, although it seems a little half-baked. While Uber focused on specifics, I'll take a more broad approach to the ...

Skates

Wow, what a way to end chapter. You didn't have any mistakes that just stood out, and besides I generally don't go over spelling mistakes. This is a great beginning ...

*Rated PG-13 because of language and references to adult themes* **I make no money from this story. It was done purely for joy. All copyrighted material belongs to it's owner** ...

This was a great story, albeit the hidden meanings were lost to my weak mind. One thing I don't like is introducing a character, have them there to do something ...

Usually, I love short stories. Stories that end up being verbose (like my own) start to bore me; just get on with the story! But this was too brief. If ...

A person who is still looking for their soul mate (being 1/2 of a split or broken soul), or some one who has found love, but has had it taken ...

As you can tell, I'm new. But from what I've seen, I think I'll like it here. I'm not new at forums; I've been going to the forum on [url]newgrounds.com[/url] ...