TheThing

It's a poem. About a girl named Jacqueline. ----------------- While I was playing cards, I met the Jacq of Hearts. And from that moment on, I knew we could never ...

This is a very good poem. The words come very naturally, and feel like the speaker is actually holding a conversation with me. Believe it or not, that can be ...

That was a great theme for a poem. It speaks to just about everyone - how we, as a society, hides our actual emotions in the course of public life. ...

... There is absolutely nothing to say about this, Yeah, I was just kind of looking to share it, see if people could connect to how I'm feeling. It's nice ...

Obviously, I'm going through some tough times right now. This is just a stream of consciousness of everything I'm feeling right now about this girl, but I've been told that ...

A rather simple poem I wrote about a girl. Hope you guys enjoy ---------- Just like a rain storm, she's Advancing across the sky, Circling above my head, Quietly waiting ...

Thanks Max, I'm glad you liked my story. This was posted after my first editing session, and I'm in the middle of my second. I'm sure if you read through ...

I... I honestly don't know what to say. This was the most positive review I've ever had. Usually something is wrong, or this part doesn't feel right, or there's a ...

NOTE: This is a bit long (5,000+ words), so make sure you're comfortable and got something to drink before you start. And this is soft sci-fi, so don't complain that ...

I really like this poem, but I'm going to focus what I didn't like. I'm not a big James Dean fan (all I know is that he was in Rebel ...

I agree with Evi. While it is a nice poem with a lot of meaning to it, the haiku format hinders it. Like Evi said, it gets repetitive when done ...

I actually really liked this. I thought the comparison of a single wave from an ocean storm to a ballet dancer was wonderful and imaginative. The only thing I would ...

I've been bouncing this idea around from a while, but only now have I had the time to put it down and edit it. This is soft sci-fi, as in, ...

While this poem has some good bones, it lacks the muscle to really carry the poem. You picked a tough format to work in. These type of poems are usually ...

This poem does not having any feeling/it's boring/it's wordy I think some people are missing the point. It's supposed to be boring, it's supposed lack emotions, and it's supposed to ...