TheRobster1991

One thing I really liked about this poem is that it can be taken from different perspectives. First of all: it could be interpreted as a deep hatred of the ...

It was a nice poem. I personally think it should be called 111 Times as it is in the poem twice: bleakness interrupted 111 times and and smile 111 times ...

The sun did rise one Sunday morning Gathered light from dusk to dawning I rose quite early out of bed And tried to arouse my sleepy head With cups of ...

I have to say this was nice to read. And I was surprised because of the title. Why is there no title? I think it needs a title. It's a ...

A scarlet night is all I ever really hope for The woman of my heart dressed in red and silk Uncovered by the clouds breath need no more Flourishing in ...

What I really love about this poem is that it starts off with saying who is innocent but then it really packs the punch and delivers the punch line. I ...

This is a film Script FADE IN: EXT - TRIBAL VILLAGE - NIGHT A multitude of villagers, bathed in flickering yellow light from the camp-fire, gather crystals of various hue ...

Fall, fall, watch him fall. Thump, thump, she's thrown to the floor. I really don't know, but this verse made me think of the Nazi's when they threw the Jews ...

There are many things to use as inspiration. Start with things you know: Family, People, Your job, Your school, Then move maybe onto with things you appreciate: Nature: (Which in ...

The thing that I don't understand is why some verses have three lines while others have four. They don't have a pattern to them in that one verse has four, ...

I think it's interesting but I don't understand the structure of it. It would be nice to have been set out in verses. But it created good use of imagery

I really like this poem. The words inbetween the verses made more of an impact and was like a verse in themselves. Nailed. Savior. Forgive. Worship. Forgotten. For us. And ...

Sorry - the layout is not as it should be. But I've done my best. This is just some of a screenplay that I've been working on. It is very ...

I’m walking through life, not quite dead, not quiet alive I can’t feel my soul, and I can’t feel my heart, if I can’t live without you, then why are ...

I liked how it was very descriptive. You can actually picture the male's hands. Spread like a star, his hands are big Thick and strong, a cord of muscle ripples ...