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Re: Stuff
This is so funny. I guess it's supposed to be humourous right. It made me chuckle but alas there's not much advice for critical construction that I could give. It's ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
Bravo! Very funny XD Considering I love the FUN Song!
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Christianity ( In a Nut Shell)
You have been reading ALOT of good Christian books. ALOT of them
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Defend Zion
Marching forward, is what I've been told to do Take the life of the living, it's not my say What, what, do I really have to? I don't really want ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: A Letter To God...
Wow... there hasn't there been a time when we all felt like God gave the best features to somebody else. Very real, very deep. Alot of depth. A few things ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Welcome To My Happy End
This sounds like it would make a great song, I liked it, alot. It's kind of like a goodbye to everyone forever. I'm not sure what you mean by: Well ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Who Am I
I would say that the only thing that needs changing as far as I can see so far is the spelling, but that's already been covered
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: War Of The Immortalitas - Part Two
This is Part Two. Please give feedback! I would greatly appreciate it INT – REBEL’S BASE – DAY An underground operations base. There are many people there, all armed with ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: The Bench
They were funny, I laughed. But there is something you need to fix. "Episode 3: Proposal" Laura is sitting alone on the bench, where Paul had asked her to meet ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
Hahaha!!! Very funny! Interesting poem! Very clever, too clever almost. There's nothing I could say for improvement that other people had already told you themselves. It was really clever in ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: War Of The Immortalitas
Screenplay for Film. Third one in the series, Endangered Seas being the first one. Be honest but kind EXT – NEWYORK CITY – DAYTIME Hover over the city. It looks ...
Apr 9, 2011 - Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN) Dec 9, 2010
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Re: The Sheep and the Goats (Part One)
First 10 pages of a Christian Screenplay I'm writing. You don't have to be Christian to review it because it doesn't have much Spiritual connotations in this part. Please be ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: I met a girl today
I'm not sure if it is obvious but the girl was looking in a mirror. Did anyone understand that? I didn't know that until you said it. It wasn't all ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Existence of God
As far as I'm concerned the existence of God is an important question, but the question should be answered by God. So err... why don't people ask God if he ...
Dec 6, 2010