TheRobster1991

Please read the spoliers This is actually the rewritten version of something else I put on here called Endangered Seas. This one is better, much better. And this is actually ...

I had no idea it was about Abortion, I thought it was to do with dreams/ambitions. But it was still very beautiful and a beautiful and unconfrontational message. I can't ...

I really like this. I like this a lot. One of the things that I like the most about this drawing is the incredible amount of detail in it. Particularly ...

Please read from the Start if you had not read this before!!! It will make sense that way! EXT – GRASSLAND – SIMULTANEOUS The ‘Den of Fornication’ is in the ...

This is pretty good for a complete beginner I have to say. It didn't rhyme, but it didn't really need to and I like the way you associated all the ...

Hey, it's me again. This poem was really lovely. I'm only really sorry that I can't offer any advice on how to improve it. It was in my opinion well ...

This is very short, very very short. I don't think I've ever read a poem this short, it's so unusual. The rhyming was simple, but effective. I’ve never wanted anything ...

This is the next step. It is the following Act

Here is the continued on of the first one. If you hadn't read the first one then view this: ACT TWO FADE IN INT – NIGHTCLUB – NIGHT Flashing lights, ...

This has to be possibly one of the sweetest poems I've ever read. My heart melted. It really did. You must be very close to your Grand Father and I'm ...

I wouldn't say it's completely useless. I really liked it, especially the simplicity of it. It wasn't over complicated and in various places it actually made sense. It did in ...

This is the First Act. With the Teaser. It is Christian, if you have beef with that then there's a little 'X' you can press in the right hand corner ...

Very interesting. Short and snappy, very thought out crunch words. But, what is it that makes you deformed in the poem. I don't understand? Halloween is mentioned but that doesn't ...

This made me think of Romans, when I read it I got the image of a Roman Soldier that rebelled against the army, I don't know why but that's what ...

To be very honest with you, I didn't understand it. The only thing that I got from it was the mind that is hurt, but in what way? I can't ...