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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dying Darkness (revised)

    I really liked this poem. I think the entire thing flowed, although the end was a bit off. The darkness seeps closer reaching for it knows her she's familiar with ...

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Information Desk Re: How to Modify Your Blog

    Lauren- It's all good! I found a similar website that worked!! :) Thanks for the help though!

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Information Desk Re: How to Modify Your Blog

    Lauren- I tried the photobucket url, but it doesn't work either! The photo I want is a collage I made on paint, is there a problem with that?

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Scene

    Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the hands that left them, soaked with red, are begging to be cleaned. I like the contrast between the blood and the ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: V.I.C.T.O.R.I.A.

    This is an interesting idea! I think the poem didn't really flow, but it all links back to you which is nice. Is this really about you, because it seems ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In His Memory

    I really like the way you formatted this. It sends a strong message and it makes me really miss him too. Never going to let go of him completely This ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Something That I Wrote When I Was Seven

    This is amazing! You really started writing at a young age! ;) Lol, but seriously I remember the stories I used to write when I was little :P

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Information Desk Re: How to Modify Your Blog

    How do you make a picture, from a file, work as a background? I've typed the name with the proper ending (png) and I've tried putting it on facebook and ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Words Will Always Hurt You

    This was a really awesome piece! I think it flowed and made sense, there's a hint of mystery as to who the main character is until it's noted that it's ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: "You're a First Rate Geek" (You Belong With Me PARODY) Edit

    :P That's really funny!! I love your creativity ;) But, I am most definitely a Star Wars fan!!

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Summer Photography - 1

    Hey Lava! I love your photo's!! I think my favourite is number four and of the two I like the first one better, only because there's a small part of ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Leap (Green Eyes)

    Wow, I think this is a great story. I love how you express all the senses, the smell of the cab, the feel of Max's lips... I really like how ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Renesmee Cullen

    I think that this is a very interesting aspect, to look into Renesmee's future ;) Good job! I like how you made her life similar to Bella's, but maybe add ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hey :D I'm new, but I think this website is a great idea. I've never written much before, but I've always loved English, so I'm going to give it a ...

    Jul 28, 2010


So verily with the hardship, there is a relief, verily with the hardship, there is a relief.
— Quran Ch 94:5-6