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Re: Dying Darkness (revised)
I really liked this poem. I think the entire thing flowed, although the end was a bit off. The darkness seeps closer reaching for it knows her she's familiar with ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: How to Modify Your Blog
Lauren- It's all good! I found a similar website that worked!! :) Thanks for the help though!
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: How to Modify Your Blog
Lauren- I tried the photobucket url, but it doesn't work either! The photo I want is a collage I made on paint, is there a problem with that?
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: The Scene
Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the hands that left them, soaked with red, are begging to be cleaned. I like the contrast between the blood and the ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: V.I.C.T.O.R.I.A.
This is an interesting idea! I think the poem didn't really flow, but it all links back to you which is nice. Is this really about you, because it seems ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: In His Memory
I really like the way you formatted this. It sends a strong message and it makes me really miss him too. Never going to let go of him completely This ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Something That I Wrote When I Was Seven
This is amazing! You really started writing at a young age! ;) Lol, but seriously I remember the stories I used to write when I was little :P
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: How to Modify Your Blog
How do you make a picture, from a file, work as a background? I've typed the name with the proper ending (png) and I've tried putting it on facebook and ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Words Will Always Hurt You
This was a really awesome piece! I think it flowed and made sense, there's a hint of mystery as to who the main character is until it's noted that it's ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: "You're a First Rate Geek" (You Belong With Me PARODY) Edit
:P That's really funny!! I love your creativity ;) But, I am most definitely a Star Wars fan!!
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Summer Photography - 1
Hey Lava! I love your photo's!! I think my favourite is number four and of the two I like the first one better, only because there's a small part of ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Leap (Green Eyes)
Wow, I think this is a great story. I love how you express all the senses, the smell of the cab, the feel of Max's lips... I really like how ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Renesmee Cullen
I think that this is a very interesting aspect, to look into Renesmee's future ;) Good job! I like how you made her life similar to Bella's, but maybe add ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey :D I'm new, but I think this website is a great idea. I've never written much before, but I've always loved English, so I'm going to give it a ...
Jul 28, 2010
