TheReader22

I long to be free. I like this opening To just fly away, to soar over the colorful tree tops of orange and red. I think this line is a ...

For a first attempt, I think this is great :) I love the rhyming, it really works for this poem! My faith rattles and shakes My soul sighs and aches ...

Okay, I like the poem, but some of the lines are a bit off. I put my corrections in red and comments in purple. Let me chase my ghosts , ...

Very good poem! Eternal life is such a good lie, But in the end we all must die. The life that is lived, has no better meaning, Than if we ...

I think this is adorable! I love the rhyming and I love the reply the boy gives!!:) So cute! Umm, I think most of your mistakes have already been covered, ...

I really like this poem. At first I didn't understand why they were running to the Ham:P There's a few mistakes, is there intentionally no capitalization? the love they had ...

Hmmm, I think this was very interesting. It's a style of poem that flows, but all connects at the same time. Good job, but just one question and I might ...

Thanks so much Abigail_W.!! :) Ya I think I like it better too :P Ya, but when it's really late I just like to stay in my room lol. And ...

That's so tragic!!! POOR SNAPE! I absolutely adore him after reading the seventh book!!!!!

That's really spooky! :P But good job! There's a few spelling mistakes, but I think Abigail got them all, so just remember "I" before "E" except after "C" and in ...

I love all the Harry Potter books, but I hated the third movie. Maybe it was the new director.. but I don't know! I understand what you guys mean about ...

I think this is a pretty good add on to Breaking Dawn. Of course, it's no exactly how Stephanie Meyer illustrates Bella's mind, but I still think you did a ...

Thanks so much! You're the first person ever to criticize my work! :) I always try and capture the sunset and not the houses, but out my window it's really ...

I'm not a great photographer, but I love taking pictures of the sunset out my window :) So, these are a couple of my favourites. Let me know what you ...

I really like the quality of the camera! Was this a film or digital camera? I absolutely adore the third photo! Although I'd never be able to take it because ...