TheReader22

This is very good :) I just have a few grammatical corrections/suggestions. They're in a bluish colour. My feet pound the grass under my cleat cleats? My heart hammers to ...

She dances alone under the tree. The bodies surround her all shining with glee. She twirls around in circles, they follow her beat. They watch her in wonder and follow ...

I think you should know that you're very talented and I could never write this style!! I actually have no idea how to give you advice on how to change ...

First off I just want to say that I really enjoyed this poem :) I can relate and I think the best poetry or story is something almost everyone can ...

This year for my English summative I have to write 10 short stories that are EXACTLY 60 words. (It's called 55+5) So I've written a bunch, but these are the ...

Total turd. Whats up with that Prokaryote? :?: Snoink: I like the villians you chose!! :) Although, personally I don't think of Darth Vador as a villian because he IS/was ...

twiggers- OH MY GOD!!! The part where Ron saves Harry is my FAVOURITE part in ALL the books! (Besides A LOT in the seventh book:P)

Hey! I love all of these pictures! I don't have much to say but here you go: 1) This is a great sunset/sunrise, although personally I would have taken a ...

For an "amateur", these are really nice :) 1) I really like how it's only one flower,the "lone" flower :P What's it sitting on? Is that a knight? 2) This ...

IgnisandGlacialis: If your crazy then I'm insane. Harry Potter is what I dream about at night. I wish SO badly that I could be Hermione or Ginny or ANYONE in ...

You're so lucky you got to witness such a beautiful sight :) I adore the first picture, the way the clouds overlap is amazing! Did you edit this in any ...

If I'd seen this before, I could have gotten it :P But so you know, this is amazing. I cannot believe how detailed it is! Every part of her face ...

OH MY GOODNESS. I completely suck at art, so I'm so sorry that I can't give you accute details on what to change, but I just HAD to comment on ...

The first one is actually awesome! It's such a cool scene and I love the colours! The second one is SO creepy! :P Lol, maybe it's just me, but that's ...

Welcome back Echelon :)