TheRazzle

I liked it! The promised ending was wonderfully twisted. You should probably read through it and check for spelling errors, or just wrong words. I understand the 2am thing though, ...

The whole thing struck me as more of a nightmare than the afterlife, but i loved the feel of it. Beautifully surreal at the beginning, with a lovely shoking twist. ...

I love the innocence. There isn't much I can say that hasn't already been said. I almost got a futuristic feel off of it, like an End of the World ...