TheRazzle

(Sheesh sorry, I wanted to post sooner, but I had too much stuff to do!! I like whats going on with the story, Tabby, I think you'll work out fine! ...

Even worse. Imagine the third generation, where Davnick's kid and Reva's kid have Kids. XD

Davnick I walk into the clearing where we have made camp just in time to hear Tess and Jared talking. "And no, we are not killing anybody." Tess snaps. "I ...

Opps, sorry Shadow. I'll post after you! :D

Davnick I stare through a gap in the bushes at Seena and her brother, hugging and bawling. Jealousy burns in my chest. Not because of the hugging; They're siblings afterall, ...

Kk no problem, Ill post tomorrow.

Davnick "What?" I ask the upside-down Sheara head in front of me. "Why would we have eggs for dinner?" She looks at me, confused. "You said breakfast..." "Oh, oops. Sorry ...

(I missed Davie... so here he is!) Davnick I wake slowly, luxuriously. My eyes flutter open to a sun well on its way to setting. Sheara is still curled up ...

Wow, I really liked it. Does this guy you wrote about happen to have a brother? ;) I'm just kidding, of course, but I thought your piece was great! The ...

Really good job, I enjoyed reading this piece. Your word choice was great, and I liked the contrast between the first and second stanzas. I particularly liked the first line. ...

Keradon I sit in a plush armchair with my feet up on the desk, stroking Reshes fur just behind his ear. He's making a little purring noise in his throat. ...

Hey Brighter, do you mind if I kill that jerk of a guy that kissed Niyah, or do you want to use him later? Cuz I kinda want Keradon to ...

(Up and adam Davie. Davie? Davie? WAKE UP!! :D ) Davnick My mind touches consciousness just long enough for me to feel the pain. I moan, and hear Seena's voice, ...

(Whoo hoo, another boy!! Ladie Rogues everywhere... try not to puke. :P ) Name: (Both names.) Keradon Lecher, origionally Jorden Tarish Gender: Male Age: 17 Doll or Rogue: Okay, here's ...

Hee hee well, I vote we blow some thing up, not some one. :D