TheRazzle

I liked it! The promised ending was wonderfully twisted. You should probably read through it and check for spelling errors, or just wrong words. I understand the 2am thing though, ...

You gave to me a little book, and I pressed it to my chest. You said to always keep it close, I said I'd do my best. But I was ...

Davnick I lay on the ground, breathing heavily. I pushed myself to hard... I haven't fought like this since... I felt a sharp pain in my chest, but it didn't ...

Davnick My hearing came back first. I passed out. I have no energy left. I hadn't expected the huge draw on my power Cloaking the feild would take. I heard ...

The whole thing struck me as more of a nightmare than the afterlife, but i loved the feel of it. Beautifully surreal at the beginning, with a lovely shoking twist. ...

I love the innocence. There isn't much I can say that hasn't already been said. I almost got a futuristic feel off of it, like an End of the World ...

Davnick I ignored Reva's stab at my intelligence, and glanced around. We had been surrounded. The bear had dissappeared, and now one of the girls was holding claw-like weapons. There's ...

Davnick What the.... what in Sarnin's Name just happened!? I thought. The only thing I was regestering now was cold, and pain. My eyes had long since stopped functioning correctly, ...

Thats fine with me. I think we should let the fight rage a little before you actually find us though.

Davnick Okay, this is starting to irritate me. I thought as Reva sliced deep gash in my arm. The pain didn't even regester, but now, it would be nearly impossible ...

Davnick The girl was good. She dodged my first few attacks. She spun, croutched low the ground. "Who are you?" She hissed. I paused my attack, but stayed prepared to ...

Davnick I step out of a small shadow cast by a withered tree, looking after the large grey-white wolf that just sprinted by. A Pet. Probably running to its Rogue. ...

Davnick (So sorry, havent been able to post yet.... fail.) Ugh, I hate mornings. I think, sitting up. I'd slept on the ground, with no sleeping pad. Again. I hate ...

Nice TheBlondie. This story needs somebody innocent-ish. And KindredSpiritBee... chilling. Lovely mental image there. :shock: Ha ha!

Name: Davnick Tarish Age: 19 Gender: Male Davnick is a Rogue Apperance: Davnick is about 5'9", with brown hair so dark is seems black. His eyes are a brilliant violet ...