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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (I of VI)

    Thank you for this wonderful review! I hope to read more of your reviews as our story progresses. Thank you once again!

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: The Blood of the Martyrs- Chapter 2: The Encounter

    Thank you, very much, MysteryMe! I agree with everything you commented. I went through this chapter again and I must and admit that I was a bit hasty at the ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Thank you very much, MysteryMe! I appreciate everything you said in this review and will definitely make use of your nitpicks. I'll also ask for your opinion on future chapters. ...

    May 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Thanks, Blue, I really appreciate this review. I'll be sure to clarify all of the questions you raised as well incorporating more of Abelard's thoughts and feelings. Your assumption about ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1

    Thank you very much, James. I'll be sure edit out the errors you pointed out.

    May 1, 2014


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— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief