TheModernist

If you can answer that question then everything else melts away. At least that's the hope, but I believe it.

Shadowraiki is right about creating a french mood with a single phrase. The whole time I had a picture of the south of france in my head, but at the ...

This was really I good and the miles davis reference was perfect.... "It’s like I’m playing with the wires of a bomb." That's a great and actually humorous image. Punctuating ...

This was supposed to be an attempt at flash fiction. It definitely exceeded the word limit (for the contest) but I would like to expand on this; so tell me ...

You got it. I left high school early because I felt like I was losing my right to imagine. I didn't know this then of course, it just felt like ...

This was cool I liked it a lot. Haha there's so much to explore in a dank mind, so keep exploring and keep writing. I have to say the first ...

Bent low and forlorn roses will droop unnoticed. Winter is loveless

This was great. I love little poems like these. I have to say that I feel like punctuation wouldn't make much of a difference. The spacing and capitalization helps pace ...

The flow worked. In fact it felt like I was reading poetry. More Images and feelings than a real narrative story, but there definitely a ton of ways you could ...

I have to say, you're echoing some of my own feelings: I've been halfassing writing and I know I should apply myself to that. And I think I know exactly ...

That was a great piece of writing. It's personal and real and you know it when you read it. Regarding the first reply: keep the "you." This story is a ...

I love short fiction I like this and this was done pretty well: quick, clever and it had a point. You may want to tweak the dialogue a little bit ...

I really liked this one. It left me with a similar impression as your daisy poem which I also really liked, so good job with consistency. The structure really helps ...

This was really good, good work. As for a name, if you can't think of one then let it be vague and let it be called "a thought" or some ...

This was good. It was short and simple. I think that it may benefit from some punctuation, however. The other thing I would suggest would be to change "move" to ...